A Science Fiction Historical?

So for the last six weeks or so, I have been writing and rewriting the “big reveal” scene in East of Yesterday, trying to nail down the basics of time travel.

(Yeah, so the book is almost done, and I still had not figured out the rules of time travel. But in many ways, the story shaped the rules.)

I wrote an exhaustive scene that walked through all the whys and wherefores. Even as I was getting through it, I knew it was a bit much to expect the reader to absorb, but I kept going because I knew I could always cut. I finished it up, went to the point at the end of the story where I left off, and realized that what I just wrote would not work with what I already had. Did I want to change the story? No. It is all plotted, and I like it, and it works, story-wise.

So I threw out the Big Reveal scene (3000 words) and wrote a much shorter scene that left most everything in the dark, and gave a few kernels of info to the reader, and let my story stand. And I was happy. This was much better. I thought I was done.

But. Then.

On the way to work the other day (I probably better never give up the idea of going to work, because these epiphanies during morning or evening drives have happened more often than I can recall), I had a marvelous idea. It was one of those “Aaaah. Now that works!” moments.

So I wrote it all into my wiki today. And I realized that this is no longer fantasy-based time-travel. It’s science fiction. Everything I base it on comes from science–except just a couple things.

One fantasy element–a mental power–is about as fantasy-like as a Vulcan mind-meld. It is certainly not as fantastic as the Force. And not as powerful as the dragon time-jumps in Dragonriders of Pern.

The other fantasy element is the supposed temporal qualities of silver. I used silver because (1) the pure silver content in sterling silver jewelry is quite high and (2) because silver does have a legendary history as an esoteric metal, which I used slightly.

The scientific elements that I had to research came from the Periodic Table of the Elements, the stellar history of planetary ores, alloys vs. pure elemental metals, the Chronoception sense, also known as our perception of the passage of time, and (lightly) time as a fourth dimension.

So two fantasy elements vs. five science elements.

I’m still calling it a time travel historical, but I feel happier about this because I always thought of time travel as a geeky science fiction thing, and now the story comes closer to what I intended.

So, now to rewrite that scene for the fourth time. And then to get on with the ending.

7 Thoughts to “A Science Fiction Historical?”

  1. So, you realized the scene was sci-fi, but the story is still fantasy? Or maybe the story is time travel and can take either explanation… I’m quite intrigued either way I must say and it’s the first I noticed about the tale! I recall fondly the nice, comprehensive treatment of the various styles of time travel in the GURPs rule book I bought. I would certainly reach for that if I needed to start researching.

    1. Not just the scene; the whole story is closer to science fiction. But as a genre, I think it feels more like a fish-out-of-water historical. I’m just calling it a time travel historical. Glad you like the concept.

      I have never read the GURPs rulebook, but tvtrops.org has a comprehensive time travel section you would probably like.

  2. This sounds like an interesting book. {Smile}

    I’m amused by how you came up with the idea. If a lot of problems really do work themselves out during the drive home from work, you’ll need to figure out a replacement drive if you stop working there. {Smile, wink}

    Anne Elizabeth Baldwin

    1. I could put the top down on my jeep and take a long drive down a woodsy road … 🙂

      1. I love scenic drives, personally. {BIG SMILE}

  3. That’s such an awesome moment when you realize the direction the story has been wanting to go. 🙂 You’re right- time travel ought to be science fiction, the same way anything with space ships is automatically science fiction.

    1. Exactly! I’ve seen it done as fantasy but that just does not work as well for me. There are still no time machines, tho. I’m glad to have managed that feat.

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